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This is my creative critical reflection for my magazine Fishing Sarasota. Creative critical reflection

This is my final submission. I have made the final touches to my magazine like I fixed the white strip at the bottom of the cover page. I also put my text into columns and made my pictures to cover more space on the 2nd page of my article.

My partner and  I presented our magazine to the class and received feedback on how we can improve our magazine. One thing that could be fixed was the subtitle font that my partner used was different from my magazine. The fonts need to be the same because we are the same magazine just different issues and all other magazines have the same fonts in there issues. Another problem was my table of contents was just called the table of contents and they said I could use a more creative title. The title page of my magazine had a small white line across the bottom where the picture wasn't cropped to fit the page. I need the cover the small white stripe then the cover will be done . Also on the second page of my article I need to cover more white space. I'm going to try to make the two pictures that I have bigger so that the cover more space and it will be more professional. The picture below is of the second page of my article that I need to cover more white space.